Thursday, March 8, 2012

Journal 53: Triolet

I like basketball
And it's fun to play
Basketball is harder then volleyball
I like basketball

In basketball, you must be tall
Or else it would be hard to play
I like basketball
And it's fun to play





How do we write a poem
We write it in rhythm
And it should be awesome
How should we write a poem

When I wrote this poem
Nothing rhymes with rhythm
How do we write a poem
We write it in rhythm


2 comments:

  1. Very nice poem hank. I would encourage you to find a word that rhymes with rhymes other them rhythm. Maybe um well something, just another word that rhymes with that.

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    1. Thanks, but there were no words I can find that rhymes with rhythm.

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